The second section is more contemplative, or, at least, contains more commentary. But that doesn't mean the lines don't sing. "Dear Mahmoud", for example, is a quick-weft comment on composition in context, and "Every Note Is Equal" an image-rich poem about watching the Grammy Awards. Di Nardo has a talent for connecting the narrative line to life, and making it memorable.
In the third section, Birthplace, the poems steep slowly while increasing the intimacy factor. There is much mention of ruby (as colour and name), and women appear in various states of reflection. Sadness lingers, though time doesn't, and the end feels like a return.
Maintained throughout is a witty wordplay that pleases. But these are, often, grim poems for all their play with language. Serious poetry in theme and execution. Di Nardo's expert use of line break and rhythm between lines, the pauses of sound and meaning, are all as significant as they need to be.
I'm so glad I got the chance to read this, because it's going on my list of favourites for this year.
*Many, many thanks to Brick Books for the review copy!
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